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Whisper?

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"You'll wish you'd died at seventeen. " Silence has become a myth in a world where the whispers of a sleeping entity never stop. From birth, every human hears them. A constant raving that twists the mind and body, blurring the line between madness and revelation. But at seventeen, everything changes. Through a strange and risky process, you become a Listener, someone who pulls a single word from the chaos. A Metaphor. One word that silences the noise reshapes your fate and starts a lifelong journey to understand what it really means. Luckily, understanding gives power, but at a cost of course. Everyone dreams of reaching seventeen, including Faust, who has always wanted to silence the voices and find clarity. Instead, he receives a question: "Why?" And a disturbing defect. Now branded with the most uncertain Metaphor, Faust is pulled into a search for meaning that cuts deep into the world's buried truths and the cost of knowing them. Because here, curiosity isn't just dangerous, it's deadly. Clarity comes to those who listen. But what's the cost of clarity? Follow Faust and ask the question... Did curiosity really kill the cat... or something worse?
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Chapter 1 - Seventeen Ceremony?

"You'll beg for the whispers to end...

You'll wish for a metaphor...

And when you finally hear it...really hear it...

You'll wish you'd died at seventeen."

The madman's words echoed in Faust's mind like a bell, beads of sweat trickling down his forehead.

"Thinking about that gibberish now? You do have a death wish, Faust."

Around him, the desert stretched infinitely, rocks protruding from the sand in a scattered fashion. The sand swallowed his boots, and the sky split open, bleeding crimson light. He tugged at his gloves and scanned the area once more, letting out a low grunt as his face contorted in excruciating discomfort.

"The whispers aren't just voices anymore; they're like teeth gnawing at my skull, like a thousand tongues promising madness. Indeed, the whispers intensify during the Seventeen Ceremonies."

He gritted his teeth as he checked his pocket watch. "Almost twenty minutes..." He smacked his face with his palm and scolded himself, "Not like Casper. I can't end up like Casper."

Twenty minutes was all it took for his brother, Casper, to succumb to the whispers.

"Scorching sun. Dryland. Bleeding sky. Twenty minutes in and still no metaphor, just the whispers growing louder, hungrier."

With a sudden flicker in his left eye, the world rippled, the desert vanished, and reality snapped back like a frayed rope.

***

In reality...

The cold stone bit into Faust's knees. The altar loomed ahead, obsidian. Four others knelt beside him, two on one side and two on the other, with their guardians trembling at their backs.

"Listen," the priest commanded.

Kneeling, Faust and the others all wore strange leather headgear and dark linen robes, marking them as the focus of attention. Leather-bound contraptions forced their hands against their ears, fingers digging into their skulls as if to physically block the whispers.

Ironically this posture was widely known as The listener's pose, one of the physical requirements of the ceremony.

With hands pressed against the ears, some of them curled to the floor heads to the ground. While some held their ears head up right looking towards the cathedral's ceiling.

Occasionally, the priest's attendants would adjust the kneeling individuals' headgear, tightening its grip.

Behind kneeling Faust stood a man dressed in a long frock coat and windbreaker, and a woman in a dark regal gown, his guardians, his parents.

The woman turned to her husband, her eyes red-rimmed and dull with fear and despair. She gripped his frock coat tightly.

"Faust can't... end up... like... Casper, Dominic."

Dominic turned to her, taking her hand gently. The soft glow of the altar candles illuminated his sharp facial features, his eyes reflecting a deep understanding; after all, it was on a day like this that they had lost their son, Casper.

Checking his pocket watch, he assured her, "It's only been twenty minutes; Faust can do it."

Just as he finished speaking, phantom-like humanoid creatures began to materialize.

These were the ceremony's special guests of honor, generally known to the public as Lesser Spirits.

Like flies to rot, they were always drawn to the ceremony, eager to possess a host. Trying to stop them from appearing during a Seventeen Ceremony was a fool's errand. Countless attempts have been made by the cathedral, only to fail.

So, the ceremony had to proceed with their presence.

During the ceremony, they posed no danger to the congregation. Only to the kneeling celebrants, as they waited and watched for an opportunity.

Claire gripped Dominic's arm; the sudden sight filled her with dread.

The congregation tensed, a ripple of gasps spreading through the pews.

Father Maximus Korr, the priest, bore a glint of worry in his eyes as he turned his attention from the phantom creatures to address the congregation.

"Calm yourselves. As long as they can hear their metaphor before it's too late…" His gaze shifted from the kneeling celebrants back to the congregation, "… as long as they hear their metaphor before it's too late, you don't need to worry about these lesser spirits. Remember, clarity comes to those who listen."

Just as he finished speaking, one of the lesser spirits, a humanoid cat with scales on its face bolted toward a kneeling woman.

Before it could make contact, a sharp light ignited as Father Maximus sent forth a chain that coiled around the cat-like spirit's neck.

This was followed by shrieks of discomfort and pain, as the lesser spirit struggled.

Ultimately, it vanished as it's presence was purged.

This scene was exhilarating, which was part of why some of the congregation attended the Seventeen Ceremony.

Amid the constant attacks from Spirit creatures in the world, which brought about danger and fear, attendees could witness their presence during the ceremony without worry. For some, it had become a twisted form of entertainment.

Father Maximus adjusted his garments, his forehead creasing with thought. "I killed one… I must avoid doing that, or I risk inviting more."

As he pondered, two ripples in space appeared, heralding the emergence of two grotesque, phantom-like creatures.

These lesser spirits did not attack; they waited for the kneeling individuals to become more vulnerable. If a person failed to hear their metaphor, they would succumb to insanity, weakening their will and making them more susceptible to possession.

***

In the desert-like world...

"Clarity comes to those who listen... "

Faust scoffed as he dragged himself approaching the point of the bleeding sky. "... I've been doing that and all I hear is countless ravings. More like insanity comes to those who listen. "

Faust shook his head as he went through what he knew in his head. He had been reminded countless times how the process worked."

"The Seventeen Ceremony was a ritual that granted an individual a metaphor."

The whispers never stopped. From birth, they filled the minds of all, constant, meaningless, maddening, like static through a soul. But at seventeen and above, one could attempt the Ceremony. Kneel before the altar taking the listener pose with the help of the headgear in a cathedral. Enter the liminal realm. Find the bleeding sky. And if you're lucky, if you listen hard enough, you'll hear a single word from the countless whispers. A metaphor.

It silences the whispers. Gives meaning. Power. Purpose.

But if you fail? Madness, possession... or worse.

The seventeen ceremony could only be done by individuals from the age of 17 and above.

As Faust thought to himself, he walked around with his hand behind his ear as if trying to hear something. Anything. As he tried to listen for his metaphor.

Faust wasn't exactly 17, the death of his brother broke the family. Casper had failed to hear any metaphor in time and instantly went insane; the priest tried to nullify its effects, but the nullification abilities of a priest were only effective on account of an attracted lesser spirit during the ceremony.

Once insanity takes hold, there's no saving. In Casper's case, the screws in his mind loosened fast...

He instantly began to mutilate himself gradually killing himself in the process.

Due to this incident, Faust's parents had purposely postponed his seventeen ceremony until his 18th birthday. At this time, all his friends were already having their metaphors and spirit gears.

"I haven't even gotten a spirit gear". With a smack to his head, he looked at his glove and adjusted it.

" At least Casper manifested his spirit gear. I have to focus. Is there something am missing? "

Faust looked up to the bleeding sky. It wasn't clear what was leaking from the sky, but whatever it was, it was bathing the desert like fog.

Faust yawned as he looked around.

"Nothing in sight...why is my liminal space a desert? Gelatea and Uriel's version of the liminal space was different; Gelatea's was a town shrouded in a dark fog while Uriel's was a dense forest with the bleeding sky which was present no matter the version of the space".

Stretching his arms his face brightened as a flash of idea came to mind.

"Why don't I take a rest? I am supposed to listen for my metaphor, but if I am being fair to myself, I don't think anyone has been in a desert space like this, the sun is slowly draining my spirit body,much like the effect of a real desert on the physical body. I can't kill myself before the whisper does... Right?".

It would only take a few minutes. He thought to himself.

He slowly approached a conveniently sized rock, and using its shaded part as cover, he lay there for a rest.

***

Back at the Cathedral of Whispers...

Dominic looked at his wife, Claire, whose eyes were already welling with tears. As much as he felt fear inside, he struggled to express his emotions.

Claire stared at her husband, mistakenly interpreting his lack of emotion as ignorance. She released his arm and opened her mouth to speak to Dominic.

Suddenly, the silence in the cathedral was shattered. Two of the kneeling celebrants began to scream uncontrollably. Among them, a barefooted elderly woman, who seemed to be losing her grip on sanity, while the other, a man in his early thirties, whose body was being dragged away for control by lesser spirits.

Claire's heart raced as the screams triggered a strange, familiar feeling within her. Seeing that Faust remained stable, a fleeting sense of relief, quickly followed by guilt overcame her.

This was her conscience scolding her selfishness.

Afterall, Faust could easily find himself in their position.

With hesitation,Father Maximus unleashed his spirit gear once more, sending the chain toward a lesser spirit.

Although he had wanted to refrain from nullifying the lesser spirits. He couldn't allow them to possess one of his own. This was his biggest weaknesses, he was soft.

However, just as contact was about to be made, the lesser spirit,which was a chimera with one of it's heads in the form of a female human used its tail to grab another lesser spirit, treating it as a shield. This prevented Father Maximus's spirit gear from nullifying it.

In an instant, the chimera pounced onto the man's body, much like a hungry lion upon its prey.

The congregation rippled with murmurs and bewilderment. Some of them tried to get a good view by changing their seats. While some discussed it like it was a show.

The possessed man's body began to struggle as his hands were bound by the headgear. The headgear also served as a form of restriction for some spirits.

The possessed man stood up, but with hands bound to his head, holding his ears his balance was off. This allowed Father Maximus to use his spirit gear once more.

A spirit gear was just the physical manifestation of an individual soul, it was unique to individuals and had special effects and use.

The chains glowed with white brilliance; drawing a sign on his chest and chanting a prayer, he sent the chain toward the man.

As smart and cunning as the chimera-lesser spirit was, it had ended up possessing a trap. Father Maximus chains coiled around the possessed man, and immediately, he froze in his spot and began to petrify.

This was the danger of possession during the seventeen ceremony. Once possessed, any form of nullification would kill the lesser spirit and the individual body, leaving only their spirit body in the individual's liminal realm.

If the individual had a spirit gear then their spirit body could materialize in the physical realm as a memento.

At this point, it depended on whether the individual had manifested their spirit gear. If not the spirit body vanishes.

The cathedral became silent. As much as the ceremony had become a form of entertainment to some of the congregation, death was still a feared reality.

Even the woman who was losing her grip on sanity became silent for a moment before standing up and rushing towards one of the priest's attendants.

The barefooted elderly lady was a well-known member of the Cathedral of Whispers in country of Asperbone, where they stayed. She was an outcast who had failed countless times to gain a metaphor at the ceremony.

Although considered an outcast, Father Maximus permitted her to participate in the cathedral's activities because of her will and her good donations to the cathedral.

At the same instant, Dominic and Claire's attention were drawn to Faust. His body had begun to move as if struggling. This was a bad sign.

The surrounding lesser spirits also sensed another soul succumbing to the whispers. They rushed towards Faust each in their grotesque forms.

Before Father Maximus could shift his attention from the frenzied lady. Three, five or more lesser spirits plunged into Faust's body at once. His back arched as his hand was still tightly bound to his head by the headgear.

This was a rare occurrence of possession. Being possessed by multiple lesser spirits.

Most spirits fought for dominance for a host. But a legion of them? They worked together, and where more stubborn.

Claire's scream tore through the cathedral. But Faust heard none of it. Wherever he was now.