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the deviant

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a mistake from the god made a creature unbound by fate
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Chapter 1 - the mistake

Narrator: "The hero is on the verge of losing, no matter how hard he tries he just can't seem to be able to defeat the demon king"

Hero:haah...hahaha...guys run save yourself I will have to use mana burst mode to defeat me it may be dangerous,[barely standing on one knee with sword on the ground]

Healer:no we can't leave you alone you are freind of ours [spitting blood while talking]

Everyone:yeah!!! We will be together even if we die!![they power up as their friendship boosts their morals and power]

Hero:thanks guys [powers up his sword aura reaching the skys] you will not destroy the world demon king me and my friends will defeat you!!![as he swings the sword down vaporizing the demon king]

Narrator:"and thus the demon king was defeated and they continued to protect the kingdome from evil" "The end"

Anonymous1:wow what a touching story I almost cried

Anonymous2:the hero was quite powerfull at the end but he kept protecting admiring

Anonymous3:such a lame story littrele garbage

Anonymous4:shut up snake

Anonymous3:fuck you old man

Anonymous5:the only one who didn't like the story is you snake otherwise it wouldn't be at the top

Anonymous3: that's because you all are dumb to make this the number one

Anonymous6:you are just jealous that you couldn't come up with a good story

Anonymous1:ang you had quite a gore in your story as well maybe you can change that

Anonymous3:shut up love duck

Anonymous2: all your mortal hero's were evil amd not a hint of chivalry in them and they are preety weak like did he vaporize anyone?

Anonymous3: you all goody Fuckers can't handle a morally gray character

Anonumous6:and you are adding too much details in it like who synced litterel nurves of the main mortal of yours do you really think your story will join the original timelines?

[There was sudden stop to the chat as if someone took their tongue]

Anonymous1:that's very mean

Anonymous2:you shouldn't bellittle someone's ambitions

Anonymous4: I think you went too far

Anonymous5:I think I would need to call the authorities

Anonymous6:but it was true why waste such effort on things when they are futile

Anonymous3: you lusty bitch your all series are revolved around carnelian pleasures you aren't gonna make it to the original timelines either

Moderater:what's the point of the mod to hide your identity when it doesn't take two comments to tell who's who? And even though there are not real problems to the way of speech just don't go too far as to start a war

Goddess of fullfillment: I think it's not good,he just didn't like the story he criticized and now you are all annoying him what's harm in little criticism it will only improve the story

All of them: 😆 😂 😆 this bitch didn't turn the anonymos mode on!

Anonymous3: wait aren't you the one who got last place in the next tournament as much as this story was trash it's not as lame as yours you got lucky that you weren't suspended

Goddess of fulfillment: I was taking your side!!

Anonymous5: every story is liked by someone except yours you loser

'Goddess of full fulfillment leave'

Anonymous3: I wonder why she is even allowed to participate this new gods are pain in the ass

Anonymous1: as much as I like to spread love I hesitate after the story she showed they were as lame as they gets the worst part was when the villain joined the main mortal of her story lame ass

[At the main pallace of the goddess of fulfillment named the fruition of disires and in the office of her was the goddess of fulfillment Aurelia fenestra]

"Damn it!! Dawn it!! Danm it!!" She sreamed stomping the floor furiesly"it wasn't even that bad it was my 5th story I am still learning and it's not like they are liking the good stories either"suddenly one of her knights enters the room "master what's wrong" Aurelia turns screaming that creates the Shockwave that reduces the very fabric of the knights being,"haah..haah...oh! No no no!" As she realised what she did she quickly brings her back to the existence "sorry I didn't mean it" she said in return the knight replied "there is no opology needed you created me you do as you please with me" then she asked "may I know what was causing you inconvenience?" Aurelia said "it's about the stories" in response the knight said " oh that I think I am incapable of helping you in that because I don't know much about it if you explain me I may be able to help" in which Aurelia said " come here" then she started explaining it " The stories are the world we the gods create to compete with each other which then gains popularity and the less popular gets eliminated in the tournament-

Knight said " tournament?" Aurelia said "oh yeah so the tournament is the place where the stories that are not considered good gather and they fight the mortals of the stories only the top ten can continue to the story or their world will be deleted with them of course it's balanced if the world destroying mortal appears he would fight the mortal from the stories where they are not even someone who can destroy a building" knight replied " I see but why is the popularity of story important is there a prize and what could be the prize that can make you this mad to chase after it" Aurelia said "to the connection to the main timeline that is the center of the stories where the concepts come the most popular one can merge their stories element to the main timeline or a feature to the main timeline it's more of like a original world but non of the gods want to say it because their world is the maid one or some other rewards like the books of the skills or other things of other gods and consteletions but the point is that the conteletions or God's but it's hard gaining popularity with the variety of gods because the gods essanse will make them like the story but the other god will be able to criticize it" Aurelia took a deep breath as the knight give her a glass of water to cool her head then knight said " how about you mix them up?" Aurelia cunfused"huh?" Knight explained quietly " if the different gods like different story why don't mix them? If one god likes this story because it has good romance then add that essanse to the story " Aurelia jumped and hugges the knight tightly "oh my why didn't I think of that it was so simple they might not like one part but they will certainly will like the part similar to their ideal oh my you are genius" Aurelia quickly begin to start the work and started to select the category amd settings of the world to create and left it to create the main mortal of the world story she created a female mortal woth beautifully white long hair and golden eyes with 6ft height which will be her adult form when fully grown "now what should I name you? Hmm I know because the knight was the reason why you are here you will have her first name aria and insert" 'system notification the character will be aria mints' "okay done now to drop her in the world and then connect the world to the story timelines" The story timeline is the connection between different stories which I accessible by all the gods and contention to watch all the time as they please "now to add characteristics" 'selected chivalry,unshakable will,charming aura,"fuck it just add randomness she selected various characteristics as she went more then 15 or more then that "now done"as she was connecting the world to the link a mortal model of a male fall into the world as it connected to the timeline "she froze as she saw the settings of the world changing and there are dozeons,towers,system,was selected that she didn't selected and many more but it was too late the world was connected by she couldn't change the settings of the world once it was connected as she saw the settings she saw that there was more space to the side of aira mints in the main character bar but no one was there "this is a glitch I have to report it" but it was too late something was born something joined the world and the link of the stories without any characteristic or talent or the role "fuuuuuuuuuck!!!!"